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New presidente Dear Ms White, Thank you for your letter of August 25. It has been a long way to reach this moment, but all the effort was worth it. I want to start as soon as possible to change the current situation. Regarding the trip to New York, after being elected president, I have the pleasure to attend the congress as the maximum responsible of a company as important as ours. Paquita will not go this year, because she is pregnant and the doctor told her, that is not a good idea to take a plane in her current situation. Regards,

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New president .  

Dear Ms. White,

Thank you for your letter from August 25. It has been a long way journey to reach this moment, but all the effort was worth it. I want to start as soon as possible to change the current situation.

Regarding the trip to New York: After being elected president, I have the pleasure to attend the congress (1) as the maximum responsible of a company as important as ours. (2) Paquita will not go this year because she is pregnant and the doctor told her that it is not a good idea to take a plane in her current situation.

Regards,

(1) conference and convention are more common ways to translate congreso in this context.

(2) perhaps: "as the highest-ranking employee of our company"

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A New President

Dear Ms White,

Thank you for your letter of August 25. It has been a long way to reach this moment, but all the effort was worth it. I want to start as soon as possible to change the current situation.

Regarding the trip to New York, after being elected president I will have the pleasure of attending the congress which is the maximum responsibility of a company as important as ours. Paquita will not go this year because she is pregnant and the doctor told her that it is not a good idea to take a plane in her current situation.

Regards,
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New presidente

Dear Ms White,

Thank you for your letter of August 25. It has been a long way (journey, road) to reach this moment point, but all the effort was well worth it. I want (would like) to start as soon as possible to change the current situation.

Regarding the trip to New York, after being elected president, I have had the pleasure to attend of attending the congress as the maximum responsible  person most important in our companyof a company as important as ours. Paquita will not be able to attendgo this year, because she is pregnant and the doctor told her, that is not a good idea to take a plane in her current situation.

Regards,

Not bad....  where I used BOLD, those are suggestions. What you wrote works also.


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