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Eugene Kovko
Essay #107 "Sedentary Lifestyle" 04.05.18
One of the major problems of modern era is health issues caused by a sedentary lifestyle. It became an important problem as nowadays many jobs do not require any activities and mainly working day consists of long hours in front of a computer. Thus, an inactive lifestyle become more common and therefore we have an increase in diseases and conditions connected with it.
One of the most obvious negative effect of a sedentary life is an obesity. Most people with desk-bound jobs experience some kind of it and with age the probability of become obese highly increase and also it becomes harder to return to previous healthy condition. Obesity have an extremely detrimental effect on people’s health jeopardize them with many quite dangerous diseases.
Another thing, inactive everyday life promotes heart-related problems because it causes blocking within arteries. It highly dangerous and have an extremely negative effect on people and also bad habits, which are very common, only increase this effect. In many countries heart-related problems the cause number one of death amongst population and in many cases the initial reason is a sedentary lifestyle.
And finally, without regular exercises people lose in their muscle strength which can increase possibility of many problems not only with physical performances, but also with joints and a bone structure. It makes their body weaker not only in terms of physical strength, but also in sustainability to other illnesses. So regular sport activities can help people to live active life much longer.
To conclude, a sedentary lifestyle has an extremely negative effect on people and as nowadays many jobs are table-bounded it has become a real issue. As this can promote various range of diseases people should compensate sedentary work with active life outside their workplace. It not only will make their lives more interesting and vivid, but also acquire them with better health and prolong their active life, also everyone has to understand that it is never late to change your life habits and make them healthier.
2018年5月4日 12:20
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Another <strike>thing,</strike> point is that being physically inactive in your daily routine <strike>everyday life</strike> promotes heart-related problems. The excess of fat plus the physical inactivity can lead to the blockage of cardiovascular arteries <strike>because it causes blocking within arteries</strike>. It is highly dangerous <strike>and</strike> <strike>have</strike> <strike>an extremely negative effect on people</strike> and when it is associated to <strike>also</strike> bad, but regular habits, such as smoking and eating fast food, can only increase this <strike>effect</strike> health issue. In many countries, heart-related problems were the first cause <strike>number one</strike> of population's death <strike>amongst</strike> and in many cases <strike>the initial reason is </strike>a sedentary lifestyle is the main reason.
And finally, without regular exercises people lose <strike>in</strike> their muscle strength which can increase the possibility of many problems not only related to <strike>with</strike> physical performances, but also with joints and <strike>a</strike> bone structure. It makes their body feel weaker not only in terms of physical strength, but also in <strike>sustainability</strike> regard to other illnesses. So, regular sports activities could <strike>can</strike> increase lifespan and help people to become healthier. <strike>live active life much longer</strike>.
To conclude, a sedentary lifestyle has a<strike>n</strike> <strike>extremely</strike> negative impact <strike>effect</strike> on people's health and as nowadays many jobs are deskbounded <strike>table-bounded</strike> It has become a real issue <strike>As this</strike> leading to <strike>can promote</strike> <strike>various range</strike> plenty/plethora of illnesses <strike>diseases.</strike> On the other hand, people should compensate sedentary work with an active life out<strike>side</strike> of their workplace. It will not only <strike>will</strike> make their lives more interesting and vivid, but also gives <strike>acquire</strike> them <strike>with</strike> better quality of life <strike>health</strike> and improves their life expectancy <strike>prolong their active life their </strike>,. It's important to note <strike>also everyone has to understand</strike> that there is still time <strike>it is never late </strike>to change your life habits and make them healthier.
<strike>One of the most obvious negative effect</strike> A consequence of a sedentary life <strike>is</strike> could be obesity. Most people with deskbound jobs experience some <strike>kind of it</strike> degrees of obesity and with <strike>age</strike> aging the probability <strike>of</strike> to become obese can highly increase and also it <strike>becomes</strike> may be <strike>harder</strike> more difficult to return to a normal <strike>previous</strike> healthy condition. Obesity <strike>have</strike> has an extremely <strike>detrimental</strike> adverse effect on people’s health <strike>jeopardize them</strike> <strike>with</strike> leading to many <strike>quite</strike> <strike>dangerous</strike> critical diseases.
Another <strike>thing,</strike> point is that being physically inactive in your daily routine <strike>everyday life</strike> promotes heart-related problems. The excess of fat plus the physical inactivity can lead to the blockage of cardiovascular arteries <strike>because it causes blocking within arteries</strike>. It is highly dangerous <strike>and</strike> <strike>have</strike> <strike>an extremely negative effect on people</strike> and when it is associated to <strike>also</strike> bad, but regular habits, such as smoking and eating fast food, can only increase this <strike>effect</strike> health issue. In many countries, heart-related problems were the first cause <strike>number one</strike> of population's death <strike>amongst</strike> and in many cases <strike>the initial reason is </strike>a sedentary lifestyle is the main reason.
And finally, without regular exercises people lose <strike>in</strike> their muscle strength which can increase the possibility of many problems not only related to <strike>with</strike> physical performances, but also with joints and <strike>a</strike> bone structure. It makes their body feel weaker not only in terms of physical strength, but also in <strike>sustainability</strike> regard to other illnesses. So, regular sports activities could <strike>can</strike> increase lifespan and help people to become healthier. <strike>live active life much longer</strike>.
2018年5月4日
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