An essay about Coffee

But I’m warning you, I can talk about it during several times! I am going to try to be concise.

As for me (To me), coffee is a very interesting drink. It represents a good way to easily discover easily many different countries in the world, with a reasonable budget.

First of all, coffee is a historic drink: born in Africa in the middle of the fifteenth century, he   has been it was introduced to in Europa later, in the sixteenth century. It’s interesting to see that this drink has followed the development of our modern society. In fact, It has been replacing the beer, as the main drink, and has contributed to reducing the alcoholism.

Secondly, coffee is an international product which concerns people all around the world: it’s a global product. But unfortunately, we can see that the producers are in the south and the drinkers are in the North. Aware of that, I try to support privilege the ethical coffee (Wasn't too sure if this was what you meant). The Ethical coffee is a coffee which has reaches a better redistribution of the retail buy price. The goal is to offer better lives living conditions to the farmer. Of course, It is more expensive than the coffee without a label but the consequences are very important for many people. It’s a serious preoccupation for me when I drink a coffee.

Moreover, Drinking a coffee is a very pleasant moment for me: it’s like when an old man smokes a cigar or a famous wine glasses: (too many ":"s). it’s a dégustation time : I enjoy coffee degustation; I smell the coffee and try to understand their aromatic structures. I’m very stunned by the numbers of flavours offers offered by this product. Do Did you know that coffee have has more flavours than the wine? All that for a very reasonable price!

After this pleasure pleasurable time, often shared with my wife during the breakfast, I feel good, very concerned (not sure what you want to say here, concerned = inquiet in French). The day can start!

Some notes: only say "the" if you are talking about a specific object, otherwise it is without an article. E.g. "I love the wine you brought me" is correct because there is a specific wine. "I love the wine" on its own, with wine in general meaning, is incorrect.

An essay about Coffee

But I’m warning you, I can talk about it during several times! for a long time. I am going to try to be concise.

As for me, coffee is a very interesting drink. It represents a good way to easily discover easily many different countries in the world, with a reasonable budget.

First of all, coffee is a historic drink: born in Africa in the middle of the fifteenth century, he it was has been introduced in Europea later, in the sixteenth century. It’s interesting to see that this drink has followed the development of our modern society. In fact, It has been replacing replaced the beer, as the main drink, and contributed to reducing the alcoholism.

Secondly, coffee is an international product which concerns people all around the world: it’s a global product. But unfortunately, we can see that the producers are in the south and the drinkers are in the North. Aware of that, I try to privilege the choose? promote? ethical coffee. The ethical coffee is a coffee which reaches a better redistribution of the buy price. The goal is to offer better lives life conditions to the farmer. Of course, It is more expensive than the coffee without a label but the consequences are very important for many people. It’s a serious preoccupation for me when I drink a coffee.

Moreover, Drinking a coffee is a very pleasant moment for me: it’s like when an old man smokes a cigar or a famous wine glasses (what does this mean?): it’s a dégustation (we don’t use this word in English) time : I smell the coffee and try to understand their aromatic structures. I’m very stunned by the numbers of flavours offers offered by this product. Do you know that coffee have has more flavours than the wine? All that for a very reasonable price!

After this pleasure time, often shared with my wife during the breakfast, I feel good, very concerned (concerned is a bad thing, do you mean content?). The day can start!

Overall, good writing and well done! Other than the comments above, your overall writing style sounds quite formal. No particular issue but if you wanted to sound native I wouldn’t use words like “Moreover” unless you are writing a critical essay (like for a research project or for school).

An essay about Coffee

But I’m warning you, I can talk about it during several times! I am going to try to be concise.

As for me, coffee is a very interesting drink. It represents a good way to easily discover many different countries in the world within a reasonable budget.

First of all, coffee is a historic drink: born in Africa in the middle of the fifteenth century, it was introduced in Europe later, in the sixteenth century. It’s interesting to see that this drink has followed the development of our modern society. In fact, It has replaced the beer, as the main drink, and contributes to reducing the alcoholism.

Secondly, coffee is an international product which concerns people all around the world: it’s a global product (repetitive). But unfortunately, we can see that the producers are in the south and the drinkers are in the North. Aware of that, I try to privilege (to use? What do you mean by privilege?) the ethical coffee. The ethical coffee is a coffee which reaches a better redistribution of the selling price. The goal is to offer better living conditions to the farmer. Of course, It is more expensive than the coffee without a label but the consequences are very important for many people. It’s a serious concern for me when I drink a coffee.

Moreover, drinking a coffee is a very pleasant experience for me: it’s like when an old man smokes a cigar or when you drink a famous glass of wine: it’s taste test time : I smell the coffee and try to understand their aromatic structures. I’m very stunned by the number of flavours (<-this is the UK spelling) offered by this product. Do you know that coffee has more flavours than the wine? All that for a very reasonable price!

After this pleasurable time, often shared with my wife during the breakfast, I feel good, very concerned. The day can start!