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Anna
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Hi Tom,
It's great to finally hear from you! I'm very impressed that despite all the time and efforts your studies require you decided to take up a halftime job.
Well, it's natural to be nervous before a job interview especially since this will be your first one. I remember when I was applying for a tour agent position for the first time, I was so anxious that I even went week at the knees while waiting to be called in by recruiting managers. Nevertheless, I was smart enough read up on every tourism destination I found on their site in order to show them how well-informed and erudite I was. Naturally, I looked up some information about their company as well, and this has really stood me in good stead, as I knew perfectly how to answer the questions about my reasons for applying for a job in their firm in particular.
So, based on my personal experience I advice you to do some background reading on the firm and the way they work, it will make it clear that you're very interested in the position. And another tip: try to be as confident as you can in spite of all you anxiety, employers like it when a person is certain that all they say and do is right.
So, the best of luck to you! I'm sure that with all your talents and self-discipline you'll get through the interview with flying colours!
Best wishes,
Ann
2018年10月7日 11:50
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Hi Tom,
It's great to finally hear from you! I'm very impressed that, despite all the time and efforts your studies require, you've decided to take up a part-time job.Well, It's natural to be nervous before a job interview, especially since this will be your first one. I remember when I was applying for a tour agent position for the first time, I was so anxious that I even went weak at the knees while waiting to be called in by the recruiting managers. Nevertheless, I was smart enough read up on every tourism destination I found on their site in order to show them how well-informed and erudite I was. Naturally, I looked up some information about their company as well, and this has really stood me in good stead, as I knew perfectly how to answer the questions about my reasons for applying for a job in their firm in particular.
So, based on my personal experience, I advise you to do some background reading on the firm and the way they work, it will make it clear that you're very interested in the position. And Another tip: try to be as confident as you can in spite of all your anxiety, employers like it when a person is certain that all they say and do is right.
So, the best of luck to you! I'm sure that with all your talents and self-discipline you'll get through the interview with flying colours!
Best wishes,
Ann
Hi Anna!
This is really great work! Awesome use of "erudite" in particular. :)
Hope my corrections help.
2018年10月7日
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