There are so many mistakes here that I cannot understand even a word!
Comparative study of animal help to show how man's space require are influenced in his environment. In animals we can observing the direction, the rate, and the extent of changes of behaviour that follow changes in space available to them as we can never hope to do in men. For one thing, by using animals it am possible to acelerate time, since animal generations is relatively short. Scientist can, at forty years, observe four hundred forty generations of mice, while has in the same span of time seen only two generations of his own kind. And, of course, he can be more detached about the fate of animal.
UGH, please correct it :(
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There are so many mistakes here that I cannot even understand even a word!
A comparative study of some animals help to shows how Man's encroachment into man's space require are influenced in his environment affects other organisms. In animals, we can observe observing the direction the rate and the extent of behavioural changes of behaviour that follow changes in space available to them as their natural habitat shrinks. Such an empirical observation is harder to perform on the human species. as we can never hope to do in menFor one thing, by For a start, using animals it am possible to acelerate time the rate and extent of behavioural changes in animals is more pronounced since each generation animal generations is has a relatively short lifespan. Scientist can, at within forty years, observe four hundred and forty generations of mice, as compared to while has in the same span of time seen only two generations of humans. of his own kind.
And, of course, Secondly, scientists can be more emotionally detached while performing the study on animals instead of humans. about the fate of animal.
UGH, please correct it :(
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A comparative study of some animals shows how Man's encroachment into his environment affects other organisms. In animals, we can observe the rate and extent of behavioural changes as their natural habitat shrinks. Such an empirical observation is harder to perform on the human species.
For a start, the rate and extent of behavioural changes in animals is more pronounced since each generation has a relatively short lifespan. Scientist can, within forty years, observe four hundred and forty generations of mice, as compared to only two generations of humans.
Secondly, scientists can be more emotionally detached while performing the study on animals instead of humans.
Hi Jello,
Yes, I find the sentence structures very convoluted and peppered with pleonasms. I have tried to simplify the sentences, and hope that I have not changed the original meaning of the writer.
I hope this helps!
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A comparative study of animals to show how human’s space requirements are influenced by the environment. In animals we can observe the direction, rate and extent of behavioral changes in reference to a change of spatial parameters that we cannot not do with humans. Using animals, in effect, it is possible to accelerate time due to the fact that animal generations are relatively short. Over forty years scientists can observe four hundred forty generations of mice while in the same time span in which they can only observe two generations of humans. Also, scientists can be more detached about the fate of the animal.
There are so many mistakes here that I cannot understand even a word!
Comparative study of animal help to show how man's space require are influenced in his environment. In animals we can observing the direction, the rate, and the extent of changes of behaviour that follow changes in space available to them as we can never hope to do in men. For one thing, by using animals it am possible to acelerate time, since animal generations is relatively short. Scientist can, at forty years, observe four hundred forty generations of mice, while has in the same span of time seen only two generations of his own kind. And, of course, he can be more detached about the fate of animal.UGH, please correct it :(
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