Lindsey Stirling I would like to tell you about Lindsey Stirling. She is American violinist, dancer, actress and composer. She can dance and play violin at the same time. I think it's amazing. Lindse

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Lindsey Stirling I would like to tell you about Lindsey Stirling. She is American violinist, dancer, actress and composer. She can dance and play violin at the same time. I think it's amazing. Lindsey is short. Her height is 161 cm. She is really delicate. I suppose, her figure is graceful and maybe a little bit slim. Lindsey like changing her imige. That's why she has got dyed hair, but her natural colour of hair is chestnut. I guess she always care about it. In addition, she has got long fringe. I like Lindsey's face. It's looks natural. Her face is angular, clear-cut and fair. She has got cheeks with dimples and round chin. She looks really cute. Lindsey has got curious blue eyes and curling eye-lashes. She often use colorful lenses when she makes her video for You Tube. Morover, her lips is really well-shaped. She absolutely know how to make beautiful make up. In general she looks pretty and young. Surprisingly, Lindsey is 32. It was shock for me, because I thought that she is 23-24. All in all, I like her music, video and apperance.

2018年11月18日 12:11

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Lindsey Stirling

I would like to tell you about Lindsey Stirling.

She is an American violinist, dancer, actress, (<--optional comma) and composer. She can dance and play violin at the same time. I think it's that's amazing! Lindsey is short; (<--Two independent clauses that are very closely related can be separated with a semicolon instead of a period.) her height is 161 cm. She is really delicate. I suppose her figure is graceful and maybe a little bit slim. Lindsey likes changing her image; that's why she has got dyed hair, but her natural hair colour of hair is chestnut. I guess she always cares about it. In addition, she has got a long fringe frame. (<--I think this is what you're trying to say, right?) I like Lindsey's face; it's looks natural. Her face is angular, clear-cut, and fair. She has got cheeks with dimples and a round chin; she looks really cute. Lindsey has got curious blue eyes and curled eye-lashes. She often use wears colorful lenses when she makes her videos for YouTube. Moreover, her lips is are really well-shaped. She absolutely knows how to make beautiful wear make up beautifully. In general, she looks pretty young and young pretty. (<--English adjectives should always be placed in a specific order.) Surprisingly, Lindsey is 32 years old. It was a shock for me when I found out, because I thought that she is was 23-24. All in all, I like her music, videos, and appearance.

Excellently written, Marina! I love Lindsey Stirling's music too =)

2018年11月18日

Lindsey Stirling

I would like to tell you about Lindsey Stirling.
She is an American violinist, dancer, actress and composer. She can dance and play the violin at the same time. I think it's amazing. Lindsey is short. Her height is 161 cm. She is really delicate. I suppose, her figure is graceful and maybe a little bit slim. Lindsey likes changing her image. That's why she has got dyed her hair. The natural colour of her hair is chestnut. I guess she has always cared about it. In addition, she has has a long fringe. I like Lindsey's face. It's looks natural. Her face is angular, clear-cut and fair. She has got cheeks with dimples and a round chin. She looks really cute. Lindsey has got curious blue eyes and curling eye-lashes. She often wears colorful lenses when she makes her videos for YouTube. Moreover, her lips are really well-shaped. She absolutely knows how to make beautiful make up. In general, she looks pretty and young. Surprisingly, Lindsey is 32. It was shock for me, because I thought that she was 23-24. All in all, I like her music, video and appearance.

Great job. Side note: you should not use "has got". They both indicate possession so you should use one or the other, but not both.

2018年11月18日

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