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Riko
Good morning!
Today I’m going to drive with my friends to see the nemophila. It’s a bit cloudy, which is a shame… My friend is such a “rain woman” that it’s always cloudy or rainy whenever we hang out… lol But it looks like it won’t rain this time, so that’s a relief! I’m really looking forward to it!
2025年4月19日 21:32
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Good morning! Today, I’m going to drive with my friends to see the nemophila. It’s a bit cloudy, which is a shame. My friend is such a "rain woman" that it’s always cloudy or rainy whenever we hang out. However, it looks like it won’t rain this time, so that’s a relief! I’m really looking forward to it!
Hi Riko! It sounds like you have an exciting day planned to see the nemophila with your friends! You did a great job sharing your feelings about the weather and your friend's nickname, which adds a fun touch. For improvement, consider using more varied sentence structures to enhance your writing. Enjoy your trip and the beautiful flowers!
2025年4月20日
Good morning!
Today I’m going to drive with my friends to see Nemophila (are you talking about these blue flowers that you can find in Hitachi seaside park?). It’s a bit cloudy, which is a shame… My friend is such a “rain woman” that is, it's always cloudy or rainy whenever we hang out… lol But it looks like it won’t rain this time, so that’s a relief! I’m really looking forward to it!
2025年4月19日
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