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Hello,Today,I went to my part-time job again today. I worked for 6 hours and finished at 6 PM, so I met up with my friends and we went out to hang out. We're going to meet up at my friend's house and then go to karaoke. It's been a while since I've seen my friends, so I'm really looking forward to it.
2026年4月19日 10:54
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Hello, today I went to my part-time job again. I worked for 6 hours and finished at 6 PM, so I met up with my friends and we went out. We’re going to meet at my friend’s house and then go to karaoke. It’s been a while since I’ve seen my friends, so I’m really happy.
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Removed repeated “today”
Fixed spacing after commas
Simplified “went out to hang out” → “went out”
Completed the unfinished sentence naturally
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