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It is my essay: " The table illustrates the changing values of five different exported products during the period from 2009 to 2010, expressed in HK billion dollars. Overall, all categories experienced an upward trend in value, except for clothing and manufacturing. Additionally, exported metals saw a dramatic increase in value. Looking at the figures in more detail, the overall income of exported products rose by 20%, from 32 in 2009 to nearly 38,5 HK billion dollars in 2010. The figure for equipment earnings was 10,3 billion , followed by the telecommunity, accounting for nearly 8 billion. Over the following year, a turnover of the latter grew by 61% to 12,7 billion and overtook that of the former by 1,1 billion to become the major income. Next comes the metals, a striking increase of 122% can be seen in the figure for metals’ sales. Turning to other categories, the manufacturing industry saw the most significant drop of 27% in its exported value, from 5,5 billion in 2009 to 4 billion in 2010. Finally, the figure for clothing sales dropped to 5 billion in 2010 , which was nearly identical to that for metals in the same year." Hope to receive your feedback
2023年8月2日 18:32
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You covered all the categories very well. You could add a OVERALL concluding sentence, e.g. "In conclusion, the table shows that there was an overall increase in the value of exported products from 2009 to 2010. However, there were some significant drops in the value of exported products in the manufacturing and clothing industries."
2023年8月2日
Put this in the exercise section please.
2023年8月3日
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