何箫居
At first, this looks like a daunting challenge for learners, because even slight differences in sounds might make you unable to understand anything.
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2021年9月26日 01:54
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This looks like a daunting challenge for beginners, because even the slightest errors in sounds might it totally incomprehensible.
I have suggested some changes for you. Your reading is ok but you could pay attention to intonation and pitch to make it more lively. The current tone is flat.
2021年9月26日
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