Today, December 24th This morning, I drew lines on the pages of my notebook and put them in a new binder. I greeted my relatives on the ground floor and got a souvenir delicious fish. ("souvenire delicious fish" is unclear. A souvenir is something that you buy for someone else or keep to remind yourself of a special occasion or a place you have visited, For example, when I was in Japan with my niece, she bought some cute Japanese pens and stationery in DAISO as souvenirs for her friends). I packed the goods and printed the invoices for my father’s customers. I put them in envelopes and put stamps on them. I cleaned up my desk and did the laundry. I changed my clothes, because I had promised to go out with my friends today. I took the bus to karaoke and met my friends. I sang many songs and chatted with many friends. One of them was wearing very cute clothes. In the evening, I went to a shopping mall and bought some cute stickers, socks, and a handkerchief as a Christmas present for my sister. After that, we ate dinner at an Italian restaurant. Unclear who "WE" is. YOu need to say WHO. For example, My friends and I had dinner. OR I had dinner with some friends Before going home, I bought a Christmas cake at a delicious cake shop. There were many people standing in line. I took the bus home and changed my clothes. I put the cake in the refrigerator. My skin was dry, so I applied hand cream that a friend had given me as a Christmas present. Before going to bed, I took a bath and watched foreign dramas on Netflix. Excellent work!