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It was hot today. I felt hotter than yesterday. I went to Hakone yesterday. It’s a high altitude area. It was not hot, so I had a comfortable time. But it’s hot what the my school is located. I felt very hot today.. I wish the hot days would disappear..
2025年6月23日 13:13
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It was hot today. It felt hotter than yesterday. I went to Hakone yesterday. It’s a high altitude area. It was not hot, so I felt pretty comfortable. But it’s hot where the school is located. I felt very hot today.. I wish the hot days would disappear..
"It felt hotter" flows better after "It was hot." "I had a comfortable time" sounds unnatural. Maybe "I had an enjoyable time" is also good. Overall, pretty good! Nicely done! :)
2025年6月23日 23:28
It was hot today. It felt hotter than yesterday. I went to Hakone yesterday, it’s a place located at high altitude. It was not hot so I felt comfortable there. But it’s hot where my school is located. I felt very hot today.. I wish the hot days would disappear..
2025年6月23日 15:56
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