Hello, could you check this writing excercise please. Thanks in advance! ..."But let’s provide a little bit of context. It was August 23rd 1993, in a small village called xxx, when my mom heard me c

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Hello, could you check this writing excercise please. Thanks in advance! ..."But let’s provide a little bit of context. It was August 23rd 1993, in a small village called xxx, when my mom heard me crying for the first time. She probably thought I would stop crying at any moment, but for her surprise rolling on the floor crying would be something attached to my personality in the next years."

2022年2月11日 19:42

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Hello, could you check this writing excercise please. Thanks in advance! ..."But let’s provide a little bit of context. It was August 23rd 1993, in a small village called xxx, when my mom heard me crying for the first time. She probably thought I would stop crying at any moment, but to her surprise rolling on the floor and crying would be something attached to my personality in the few next years."

Almost perfect. Good work.

2022年2月11日

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