Tina
On the table there was a lot of food. I remember we had sweet and sour pork, fried roll spring with all flavors, shrimp fritters, and korean spicy noodles. We had litchi drinks and it was so good and delicious. We also had mochi , sushi, and egg fried rice with grilled beef. Asian food is so good, it's my favorite, but it's a little bit greasy,but it's fine. It's extraordinarily tasty.
2022年2月18日 21:06
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受邀老师
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There was a lot of food on the table. We had sweet and sour pork, different flavors (flavours) of fried spring rolls, shrimp fritters, spicy Korea noodles, mochi , sushi, and egg fried rice with grilled beef. We also had litchi drinks, which were delicious. Asian food is my favorite although it's a bit greasy.
Great content. I suggest you get your point across without being too wordy otherwise, it isn't pleasant for the reader. I changed some of your structure. You can use one sentence to get one point across. I would love to discuss some tips and tricks to improve your writing over a lesson. Great work and I can see that your range of vocabulary is really good.
2022年2月21日
受邀老师
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On the table, there was a lot of food. I remember we had sweet and sour pork, fried spring rolls with all flavors, shrimp fritters, and Korean spicy noodles. We had litchi drinks and it was so delicious. We also had mochi, sushi, and egg-fried rice with grilled beef. Asian food is so good, it's my favorite. Although it's a little bit greasy, it's still fine. It's extraordinarily tasty.
Wonderful, Tina! I couldn't agree with you more with the fact that Asian food is tasty.
2022年2月18日
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