hitsujigumo
Good evening.
I went to watch baseball with my family, but the team we support lost.
I have a part-time job today.
I worked 6 hours.
It was raining today so I thought there weren't many customers, but tere are many.
Tommorow is also an 8 hours part-time job.
I think I'll be more careful with my shifts next time.
2023年7月1日 14:39
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Good evening. I went to watch baseball with my family, but the team we support
lost. I had a part-time job today. I worked 6 hours. It was raining today so I
thought there wouldn't be many customers but there were. Tomorrow I'll also be in an 8
hours part-time job. I think I'll be more careful with my shifts next time.
2023年7月1日
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Good evening. I went to watch baseball with my family, but the team we support
lost. I worked a part-time job today. I worked for 6 hours. It was raining today so I
thought there weren't many customers, but there are many. Tommorow is also another 8
hour part-time job. I think I'll be more careful with my shifts next time.
These sentences are quite short so I'd like to see you join them with conjunctions or expand on them a bit. That being said, this writing style would be absolutely acceptable in a journal.
Hope this helps :)
2023年7月2日
1
Good evening.
I went to watch baseball with my family, but the team we support lost.
I went to my part-time job today.
I worked 6 hours.
It was raining today so I thought there wouldn't be many customers, but there were.
Tomorrow I will also work 8 hours at my part-time job.
I think I'll be more careful with my shifts next time.
2023年7月2日
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