Yui
Good morning, it is sunny today. I am going to the university for the first time in a while. I will take tge online lectures at my university. I am happy to meet my friends. Going out during the mourning is very good, I feel better about my self.
2021年6月10日 00:40
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Good morning, it is sunny today. I am going to the university for the first time in a while. I will take the online lectures at my university. I am happy to meet my friends. Going out during the morning is very good, I feel better about myself.
I agree, I plan to go out in the morning more often. Do you still have to take online lectures even though you can go to the university?
2021年6月10日
Good morning! It is sunny today (you should separate this in to 2 sentences). I am going to the university for the first time in a while and I am happy to meet my friends. I will also take online lectures at my university (I'm assuming that you mean you go to actual classes and also online classes). I feel good about myself when I go out in the morning (you used passive voice; probably a better way to word it is something like this).
Good job! I mostly just moved some words around. A lot of native speakers struggle with passive voice, too. 😀
2021年6月10日
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