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The question is what kind of activity makes staff more productive. When I come to mind productively, I will recommend sticking with fitness. But If the person doesn't like those activities, It would not be easy to do it. So today, I will write about what makes us the most productive. Personally, I would like to have a vacation as the most effective way to relax. Without having enough rest, we cant be productive. At this moment, we can recharge energy and think more positively. On the contrary, If we wouldn't have any rest, we would likely feel depressed. Overwork is a severe problem; If the company wants us to work more productive, it has to care for their health. Taking care of employees is essential. To sum up, the employee has a different type of personality; consequently, If the companies can provide service flexibility their own needs that would be wonderful. .
2022年5月28日 12:42
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The question is: what kind of activity makes staff members more productive? When it comes to intellectual productivity, I will recommend sticking with fitness. But If the person doesn't like those kinds of activities, It would not be easy. So today, I will write about what makes us the most productive people we can be. Personally, I think that taking a vacation is the most effective way to relax. Without enough rest, we can't be productive. During this time, we can recharge our batteries and think more positively. On the contrary, If we don't have any rest, we would likely feel depressed. Overwork is a severe problem; If the company wants us to be more productive, it has to care for our health. Taking care of employees is essential. To sum up/summarize, all employees have different types of personalities. Consequently, if the companies can provide more flexibility to their employees to fit their own needs, that would be wonderful.
You tend sometimes to put the wrong possessive pronoun, for "we" the corresponding possessive pronoun is our and for "they" it's "their". Good work.
2022年5月28日
The question is what kind of activity makes staff more productive. The thing that's come to mind when thinking about productively, is to stick to a fitness habit. But If the person doesn't like those activities, It wouldn't be easy to make it happen. So today, I will write about what makes us the most productive. Personally, I would like to have a vacation as the most effective way to relax. Without having enough rest, we cant be productive. At this moment, we can recharge energy and think more positively. On the contrary, If we wouldn't have any rest, we would likely to feel depressed. Overwork is a severe problem; If the company wants us to work more productively, they will have to take care of their's employess health. Taking care of an employees is essential. To sum it up, the employee has a different type of personality; consequently, If the companies can provide more flexible service for their employee's own needs that would be wonderful. .
I agree 😊 Most companies doesn't care about these stuff but expect productivity in their company 🤦‍♂️ Things needs to change !
2022年5月28日
The question is what kind of activity makes staff more productive. When I think about productivity, I recommend sticking with fitness. But if the person doesn't like those activities, it would not be easy to do them. So today, I will write about what makes us the most productive. Personally, I would like to have a vacation as the most effective way to relax. Without having enough rest, we can't be productive. While resting, we can recharge energy and think more positively. On the contrary, if we don't get enough rest, we will probably become depressed. Overwork is a severe problem. If the company wants us to work more productively, it has to care for our health. Taking care of employees is essential. To sum up, each employee has a different type of personality; consequently, if the companies can provide flexible services to meet each person's needs, that would be wonderful.
2022年5月29日
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