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help me to correct this paragraph (in romaji) please ^^ arigatou :) Seibutsu yūki hiryō wa, shokubutsu no haiki-mono, kudamono, kachiku fun'nyō nado no yūki zairyō kara tsukura reta hiryōdesu. Makurotomikuro eiyōso o gan'yū suru maruchi biseibutsu no tenka ni yori hakkō sa reteimasu. Saigo ni kekka to shite hiryō wa, sokutei kanōde wanai kagaku hiryō no shiyō ni kiin suru dojō e no nyōso no renzoku shiyō ga sonshō o shūfuku suru koto ga kanōdesu. Shokubutsunoseichō wa hijō ni hayaku, kankyō ni yasashīdesu. Sugoii deshou.
2011年12月29日 14:30
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I am a Japanese. If I look at parts of your sentences, they are well done, yet I'm sorry to say that your essay as a whole cofused me what you want to say exactly. If you could also write in English, you would get many answers.
2012年1月4日
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