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puedes corregirme - you can correct me Mark is 18 years old, his hair is short and black, he is not tall but is not under Venezuelabut is living in Colombia, he goes to the same school as me. we are in the same course and are best friends, he likes to shop when we are in the store. He buys a lot of shirtsand pants as well as a pair of shoes. He goes to the store every month when your parents give you money for the clothing also has a part time job, he would like to go on a trip to Japan but you can not stay hard, he would like to stay in a single room withshower, he likes breakfast arepa with egg and juice, strawberries, breakfast in a cafenear to college, does not like missing school or get out of it unfinished, he like to eatsomething after leaving school, he likes watch movies and watch animes. On Saturdayshe plays soccer with his friends and on Sundays he is with his family, he does not havea vehicle so that every day takes the bus, he has a notebook which carries almost every day to do work.

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Next time, please write in the notebook section because it is easier to correct. Can you correct me? Mark is 18 years old and his hair is short and black. He is not tall and is not in Venezuela, but is living in Colombia. He goes to the same school as me. we are in the same course and are best friends. He likes to shop when we are in the store. He buys a lot of shirts and pants, as well as a pair of shoes. He goes to the store every month when his parents give him money for clothing. He also has a part time job. He would like to go on a trip to Japan, but can't stay there for long. He would like to stay in a single room with a shower. He likes to eat an arepa with egg for breakfast with strawberries and juice in a cafe near the college. He does not like missing school or leaving early. He likes to eat something after leaving school, and likes to watch movies and animes. On Saturdays, he plays soccer with his friends, and on Sundays, he is with his family. he does not have a vehicle, so every day he takes the bus. He has a notebook which he carries almost every day to do work in.

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