Dear friends I think these sentences need to be corrected, thanks in advance for your help
1-The table provides a comparison of the average number of vehicles existed in three different roads, over 10-year period from 1993 to 2002
2-The graph provides a comparison of the number of prisoner in five countries over 60- year period from 1930 to 1980
3- The graph provides a comparison of the amount of consumer goods spent in 3 different countries in term of Toy, CDs, Perfumes...
4- The graph provides comparison of number and men and women in term of the different levels of post school qualification.
5- The graph provides a comparison of the number of population aged 65 and over in three different contries over a 100-year period from 1940 to 2040

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1- average number of vehicles DRIVEN ON three different roads over THE 10-year period
2 - the number of prisonerS in five countries over THE 60-year periord
3 - the amount SPENT ON COMSUMER GOODS in 3 different countries IN THE CATEGORIES OF ToyS, CDs, Perfumes....
4 - A comparison of THE number OF men and women BY DIFFERING levels of post [NEED A TYPE OF SCHOOL HERE; HIGH SCHOOL, COLLEGE, GRADUATE SCHOOLD etc] EDUCATION (although qualification is grammatically and definitionally correct, it would not be commonly used)
5 - the number of PEOPLE aged (aged is okay but not necessary) 65.  OR...  the POPULATION OF PEOPLE 65 and over

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