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In addition, Dickens reveals about the hypocritical purposes of the workhouses in his novel which depicts that despite warehouses are meant to be a safe haven for the poor from the filthy, outside conditions caused by the Industrialist Revolution, but the poor themselves are subjected to more hardships in the warehouses they work in. Along with that, he also revealed the hypocrisy of the charity officials.

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In addition, In his novel Dickens reveals the irony of the workhouses. The warehouses are meant to be a safe haven for the poor from the filthy, outside conditions caused by the Industrialist Revolution, but the poor themselves are subjected to even more hardships within the warehouses where they work. Along with that, he/Dickens also reveals the hypocrisy of the charity officials.