Please correct these sentences and help me to write better.
Hi every one.
Please correct these sentences and help me to write better.
Thank you in advance

- Although, he often faced with dilemma, he is a invincible fighter and endure difficulties till overcome them.

- Any religion supports morals and conscience but some people who consider their own self pioneer in a religion are not familiar with these concepts.

In this dilemma we need a person to pursuit justice by sacrificing./ In this dilemma we need a person who pursuit justice by sacrificing.

- After emerging the consequence of using poison, they embrace to don't continue use of chemical fertilizer and pesticide.

- Increase vulnerable species incorporate authorities to conflict with causes of this phenomena more seriously.

- It is applauded to innovate in classical music but this sequel must not deviate from the original. Attention to the mainstream appealing could help musicians to retain or convey the right way.

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Please correct these sentences and help me to write better.
Hi every one.
Please correct these sentences and help me to write better.
Thank you in advance

- Although, he often faced with dilemma, he is a invincible fighter and endure difficulties till overcome them.

- Any religion supports morals and conscience but some people who consider their own self pioneer in a religion are not familiar with these concepts.

In this dilemma we need a person to pursuit justice by sacrificing./ In this dilemma we need a person who pursuit justice by sacrificing.

- After emerging the consequence of using poison, they embrace to don't continue use of chemical fertilizer and pesticide.

- Increase vulnerable species incorporate authorities to conflict with causes of this phenomena more seriously.

- It is applauded to innovate in classical music but this sequel must not deviate from the original. Attention to the mainstream appealing could help musicians to retain or convey the right way.

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Here are some suggestions:

- Although he often faces dilemmas, he is an incredible fighter and endures difficulties until he overcomes them.

- Many religions are built upon morals and the use of a conscience, but some people who consider themselves pioneers in a religion are often not familiar with these concepts.

- In this dilemma, we need a person who is willing to pursue justice by offering a sacrifice.

- After learning about the consequences of using the products, they decided to no longer use chemical fertilizers and pesticides.

- As there has been an increase in endangered species, authorities have taken this phenomena more seriously.

- When musicians create music based on classical songs, it is important that they do not deviate too far from the original.

I hope this helps! I wasn't too sure on a couple of the above.

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Thank you for your notification. I will do next time.

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Pedram, a notebook entry would make this easier to correct.  There are not tools in 'Answers'. :)