Sarah
is this okay>? Furthermore, rearing chicken brought me so much fun and it was great to have these five yellow chickens’ company when I had nothing to do and they kept me busy.
2015年8月31日 02:03
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its good but this is better: Furthermore, rearing chickens brought me so much joy. They kept me busy and it was great to have the company of these five yellow chickens when I had nothing to do.
2015年8月31日
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