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is my English c0rrect? if n0t.. feeL free to c0rrect it....thanks! I dont need a guard All I wanna have is someone I can Lean 0n... I don't need a doctor Just someone who will make my w0rLd r0ck 'n roLL..... I really need you buddy But I dunno why w0n't y0u believe me! Honestly, I need y0u buDDy 'tiL eternity! wo ai y xiang n! buDdY!!!!
2008年9月18日 08:57
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Actually, buddy, no one ever says "I do not know," they always say, "I don't know." And companion is a really rare word and usually used about animals. I dont need a guard -i guess so but guard isn't really ... that common, like in a poem about your buddy. All I wanna have is someone I can Lean 0n... -all i want is someone i can lean on. Wanna have, yeah that's right but this thought, i'd say "all i want" I don't need a doctor -yes Just someone who will make my w0rLd r0ck 'n roLL..... -rock my world. rock and roll isn't really a verb... I really need you buddy But I dunno why w0n't y0u believe me! -Why you won't believe me. Verb before noun is a question. Honestly, I need y0u buDDy 'tiL eternity! -meh, yes. wo ai y xiang n! buDdY!!!! -Don't know chizoid languages so **watevies**
2008年9月19日
also do not use ambiguous words. use simple words and be DIRECT! tell what you really meant and dont play words. if your in a literary contest then phonetic and imagery words might apply
2008年9月18日
it depends upon the usage of english words, how you play with your sentences. if you are pertaining to a casual conversation, then this is somehow correct. the usage of slang words of such is acceptable if and only if the situation is informal. if your in a formal conversation, you must opt to select words that appopriate hence, it is imperative that you address it in a polite and formal way. please use instead of " i dunno" say, " i do not know" or "buddy" rather say "friend or companion.. etc..
2008年9月18日
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