Kanna
Please correct my last working day email sentences. Everyone: As I’m sure you know, today is my last day at 'Kreatio'. There are so many exceptionally talented people here who have positively affected my life over nearly 3 years and who continue to inspire me that it would take an enormous amount of time to list. I want to take a moment to thank all of you for the hard work, support, learning experiences and friendship that you have given me over the years. This company has some amazing people and I’m proud to have been part of it. I hope we have a chance to meet again in future at the crossroads of life. Thanks.
2016年3月27日 18:26
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As I’m sure you know, today is my last day at "Kreatio" (or just Kreatio if it's a name of a company). Use single quotation marks only when it appears within quotation marks > He said , " If I have 'friends' like these , I dont need enemy". There are so many exceptionally talented people here who have positively affected my life for CLOSE TO 3 years and who WILL continue to inspire me ,and it WILL take an enormous amount of time to list down what all of them ARE. Over nearly > This sounds odd >Either it is "over" ," nearly" or "nearly over" , which is not right for above context .> The game is nearly over when .... Close to = almost I want to take a moment to thank all of you for the hard work, support, learning experiences and friendship that you have given me over the years. This company has some amazing people , and I’m proud to have been part of it. *A comma is needed before conjunction "and" to seperate 2 independent sentenses I hope we have a chance to meet again in THE future . * at the crossroads of life> at a time in life when you have to make a major decision
2016年3月27日
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Very good, Kanna. You posted this as a question, so I couldn't make any corrections. However, I've changed a couple of things which I hope you'll notice if you read through my text. As I’m sure you know, today is my last day at 'Kreatio'. There are so many exceptionally talented people here who have positively affected my life over nearly 3 years and who continue to inspire me, that it would take an enormous amount of time to list all of them. I want to take a moment to thank all of you for the hard work, support, learning experiences and friendship that you have given me over the years. This company has some amazing people and I’m proud to have been part of it. I hope we have a chance to meet again sometime in the future. Thanks.
2016年3月27日
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