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Help me! Please fix my faults. I really will appreciate it! Your favorite time with you family Once time, I went to the seaside with my family. My family is small and we get on well with each other. There are my mother, my grandma and my uncle in my family. When we went to the seaside, we were happy, because we were together. I played football on the seaside with my uncle. He is an old football player. My mum and grandma played volleyball on the seaside. Then we have had a dinner and relaxed. In the evening we returned home. This day was a great day for me in my life.
2016年4月17日 15:13
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Your favorite time with youR family One time, I went to the seaside with my family. My family is small and we get on well with each other. There are my mother, my grandma and my uncle in my family. When we went to the seaside, we were happy, because we were together. I played football on the seaside with my uncle. He is an old football player. My mum and grandma played volleyball on the seaside. Then we had a dinner and relaxed. In the evening we returned home. This day was a great day for me in my life. Not bad and I've corrected the English. But.... the pattern is of a very young person speaking. Keep up the work
2016年4月17日
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