It's this correct ? The Nisava valley is part of a major natural route that from ancient times has connected Europe and Asia : the route follows the valleys of the Morava, Nisava and Maritsa and onwar

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It's this correct ? The Nisava valley is part of a major natural route that from ancient times has connected Europe and Asia : the route follows the valleys of the Morava, Nisava and Maritsa and onwards towards Istanbul. Both the Belgrade-Sofia-Istanbul road and the railway follow this route.

2016年4月23日 19:05

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That's actually very good. Very proper English, my friend.

2016年4月23日

The route through the Nisava valley has been a major gateway to Europe from Asia since ancient time .The route pass through the valleys of Morava and Marista before it reaches Istanbul . The Belgrade- Sofia- Istanbul Highway and a railway line also follow the same route. The Nisava valley , which sits in between Asia and Europe , is a major natural gateway to to Europe from Asia , and then it passes through the valleys of Morave and Maritsa before it reaches Istanbul

2016年4月23日

Not quite. Your '...and onwards...' would be better as '...rivers, and continues onwards...' ': the' should be '. The'

2016年4月23日

Thank you very much :)

2016年4月23日

Is this correct? (not It's ...) The English is good. Punctuation could be improved. Maybe "that, from ancient times, ", and "Asia. The" A semi-colon would be better than a colon there and we do not leave a space before a colon or semi-colon.

2016年4月23日

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