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Does it sound natural On Sunday we had Easter.
We went to a vigil service which started at 11 PM and finished at 4 am.
We made special.pastry and dyed boiled eggs in red.
I.put on weight since my pregnancy. I must shed more than ten kilos but I am afraid to go on a diet as it can reduce my breast milk.
2016年5月3日 13:43
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It is fine. You might also say "On Sunday, we celebrated Easter."
Happy Easter! Christ is risen!
2016年5月3日
Well done. :)
It is not quite 100% natural though. I have made a few (small) corrections below.
You can say "Easter was on Sunday" or "On Sunday we celebrated Easter".
"We made a special pastry and dyed boiled eggs red." (no need to write "in")
" I have put on weight since my pregnancy" ("Have" for past tense)
"I must lose more than 10 kilos... " ("Lose" is the idiomatic word in English for decreasing weight)
"... could reduce ... "
Happy Easter! :)
2016年5月3日
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阿塞拜疆语 (Azeri), 英语, 法语, 德语, 俄语
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