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REPORT - energy sources
I wrote a report about a graph on this site: http://ielts-academic.com/2012/06/13/ielts-writing-task-1-line-graph-with-sample-answer
Can you tell me the erros and, based on a scale of 0 to 10, give me a grade?
In the chart above regarding the consumption of renewable energy between 1949 and 2008 in the US, it is noticeable that, although there has been a perceivable surge in the use of energy coming from wind since 2000, the dependence on hydroletric power and wood power still holds.
As the graph depicts, the consumption of energy sourced from water and wood has experienced highs and lows in the US since 1950, seeing a slight decline following the introduction of biofuels and wind.
In addition to that, since 1980 there has been a contrast between exhaustible and inexhaustible energy resources. While the consumption of exhaustible sources of energy has decreased over the past 25 years, the consumption of inexhaustible resources, in turn, has risen during the same period.
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2016年5月16日 03:26
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