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Is this haiku grammatically correct?
I wanted to make a Japanese haiku for a married couple. Is this correct?
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2016年8月24日 14:31
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"Haiku" is a three-line poem with seventeen syllables in the pattern of 5-7-5. Also small words include one word. You can count your first line, "Isshoniiru", is "I tsu shi yo ni i ru". But, this is 7 words, so you have to think 5 words.
2016年8月24日
not to forget that haiku has to have a seasonal word, so it is not a haiku in traditional sense.
2016年8月24日
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