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Can you give a feedback about my recording?
I've recorded and uploaded my recording (http://vocaroo.com/i/s0PqhB6oVL5e) in response for another discussion here. Would you mind about giving me a feedback? The recording is a quote from one of Schopenhauer's books (Essays and Aphorisms):
"A man can be himself only so long as he is alone; and if he does not love solitude, he will not love freedom; for it is only when he is alone that he is really free"
2017年2月14日 12:47
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I understood the words, but you need to connect the phrases properly. At the moment you are reading word by word.
On the other hand, if you don't see a contraction ("he is"), then don't contract it. You tried to do this quite awkwardly.
The first "love" sounded unusual, and one word which stuck out was "long" - you said "lonk". Just practise the ng sound so it's a hum, not a plosive. Other odd pronunciations were "solitude" (you need a d at the end, not a t) and "free" (the vowel was far too short).
2017年2月14日
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As a native speaker I can say that you didn't mispronounce any word. Certainly not the three that were mentioned above. My observation is that you need a little more definition or sharpness in your pronunciation. But it's not necessary to worry about it. You were perfectly understandable. Good job and keep up the good work.
2017年2月14日
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Good job! "doesn't", "love" and "really" are the three things I noticed slightly mispronounced, but still understandable.
2017年2月14日
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