Is this correct? I wrote a notebook entry and even though more than 10 people viewed it, no one has corrected it. Is it written well? Or is it too confusing to correct? Please assist. ^^ 今日の朝朝ご飯の作って雨が降りました。私の犬は雨が大嫌いですけど犬をトーイルに行きたいでした。そして、犬と一緒に外に行きました。でも。。。びっくりした！！私の傘はありない！外で雨がとても寒いだ。もちろん私の犬も行きたい、雨のために。さぁどうして行きないの？トーイルに行きないですか？あっそこに入りました。朝ご飯を寒くなりました。今朝ごはんを食べたいじゃない。 This morning, while making breakfast, it started raining. My dog hates the rain, but she had to go to the bathroom. So, I went outside with my dog. But...what a surprise! My umbrella wasn't there! Outside, the rain was cold. Of course, my dog didn't want to go outside (anymore), since it was raining. Jeez, why won't you go to the bathroom? Don't you want to go? Anyway, we came back inside. My breakfast got cold. Now, I don't want to eat it anymore.