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Does this sencece make sense? And is it grammatically correct? Elephants use their body hair to have their body heat not too risen under the hot African sun.
2018年6月23日 23:24
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It makes sense, but, it's better to say: "Elephants use their body hair to regulate their temperature under the hot African sun," or "Elephants use their body hair to keep themselves cool under the hot African sun."
2018年6月23日
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You can use "so that" + a clause to make your sentence clearer: Elephants use their body hair so that their body heat does not rise under the hot African sun.
2018年6月24日
Thank you all! I was really struggling with this one. I've chosen Ariana's suggestion because she has also avoided the repetition of "body". I have to write summeries for some university tasks and I must use synonymous, it's very tough for me [emoji]
2018年6月24日
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