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Words can have an impact on our souls regardless the language that's being used, the beauty of korean alphabet captivated me ever since I first got to know about Korean language, real passions never fade away.

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Words can have an impact on our souls regardless of the language that's being used. The beauty of the Korean alphabet has captivated me ever since I first got to know about the Korean language. Real passions never fade away.