Sasha
职业教师
How many points would you give for this letter structurewise? Hello! Here is a letter written by my friend, "Dear Artem, I’ve heard that you want to go to the theatre. So I’m writing to give you some tips about where to go and what to watch. The last time I went to the theatre was in November. I went to Ivan franko theatre which is located in Kiev in the city center. The building of it looks like very cool. The last time I watched to orchestra performance and I was very impressed. I felt calm and relaxed while listening to them playing classical music. I’ve been there with my girlfriend and she was very happy and impressed about the performance. I advice you to go to the Opera House in Lviv. The building of it is very beautiful both outside and inside. Now their is a performance of one well –known european orchestra so I strongly recommend you to visit this opera. Wish that my tips were useful for you. Hope to hear from you soon. Best wishes, Jack" Could you evaluate this writing under one criterion i.e. Structure (Layout)? The candidate gets 2 points if: The style of the letter fully meets the requirements for the given format. The written statement has necessary lexical and grammatical units. The written statement is organized (structured) according to the rules for writing and organizing adopted in the target language countries. For example, for a private letter an informal style is used, which is characterised by distinctive tone as well as using direct appeal to addressee; using a name rather than a surname; using contractions and corresponding greeting forms as well as ending forms. The letter has: - greeting, which has to meet the requirements for writing a private letter - introduction (opening remarks) Attention! If in the introduction the candidate writes word-to-word the actual task of the writing section the number of points for this (b2) criterion is 1 point. - main body, which is necessarily organized into content paragraphs, there are tree content paragraphs (or two content paragraphs if two parts of the task are joined in one paragraph); - closing remarks; - ending, which has to meet the requirements for writing a private letter; - name, invented name that is appropriate for an informal letter The candidate gets 1 point if: The style of the letter and its format partially meet the writing aim, there is violation of main requirements for writing a letter. The candidate gets 0 points if: There are no signs that the format of the letter meet any requirements for writing a letter.
2020年8月6日 14:28