Juan Andrade
¿It does sound natural? I came to America to learn about its culture and language, it was my pleasure to learn its Calvinist way to do every task in day to day, where the works ethics, truthfulness, fairness, and uprightness dwells in liberty and prosperity.
2020年8月12日 20:27
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No, that does not sound natural. Try this: I came to America to learn about the culture and language. It's been a pleasure watching the Calvinist ideal of working day to day. This is a country where the citizens' work ethic, truthfulness, fairness and uprightness support them in dwelling in liberty and prosperity.
2020年8月12日
I came to America to learn its culture and language. It has been a pleasure to learn America's Calvinist approach to everyday tasking, where work ethic, truthfulness, and fairness reinforce ideals of liberty and prosperity. Look up the word "verbose" - too many words and adjectives to describe something make the sentence clunky and difficult to read. No more than three adjectives - separated by commas - otherwise the sentence feels imbalanced and heavy.
2020年8月13日
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