耳冬儿
Beautiful sentence. The wind has gently murmured through the blinds,or puffed with feathery softness against the windows,and occasionally sighed like a summer zephyr lifting the leaves alongthe livelong night.
2010年6月7日 06:23
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Yes it is lovely, I have made a few corrections to enable your sentence to flow more smoothly. The wind gently murmured through the blinds, puffed with feathery softness against the windows and occasionally sighing like a summer zephyr, lifting the leaves along the long night.
2010年6月7日
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