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I acquired this hobby when I was a child
during the journeys that I made, I have grown a lot
being open to different cultures, which punched me to this world
When I went to Italy I tried local foods
I had already eaten there
I stayed at the monastery
I was based in Fabriano
they drove me to the airport
They offered to catch me at the station
The environment is fascinating
They recommend to not face it
There’s an intense illegal practices/gangues
2024年2月3日 03:17
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I acquired this hobby when I was a child during the journeys that I made, I have
grown a lot by being open to different cultures, which punched me into this world
When I went to Italy I tried local foods I had already eaten there I stayed at
the monastery where I was based in Fabriano they drove me to the airport They offered
to catch me at the station The environment is fascinating They recommend not
face it There’s an intense illegal practices/gangues
2024年2月3日
I acquired this hobby when I was a child.
During the journeys that I made, I have grown a lot .
being open to different cultures, which punched me to this world I don't understand this. 2 problems: it's a clause, not a complete sentence. 'Punched me to this world' doesn't make sense.
When I went to Italy I tried local foods.
I had already eaten there.
I stayed at the monastery.
I was based in Fabriano.
They drove me to the airport.
They offered to picke me up/meet me, etc at the station
The environment is fascinating.
They recommend not facing it.
There are intense illegal practices/gangues.
Remember to capitalize the first word and put a period/full stop at the end of every sentence. Mostly good other than that.
2024年2月3日
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