Tomorrow is Ahmed's sister birthday, so he decided make a cake for her. Ahmed went to the shop and bought all the ingredients that he would need. He bought eggs, sugar, flour, and milk. Then Ahmed put

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Tomorrow is Ahmed's sister birthday, so he decided make a cake for her. Ahmed went to the shop and bought all the ingredients that he would need. He bought eggs, sugar, flour, and milk. Then Ahmed put all the ingredients in a bowl and mixed them. After that he put rhe mix in the oven for Thirty minutes. While he was waiting time to end up, he slept. His brother came to the kitchen, and he took out the cake from the kitchen from the oven . It looked very delcious

2025年4月18日 22:57

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Tomorrow is Ahmed's sister's birthday, so he decided to make a cake for her. Ahmed went to the shop and bought all the ingredients he would need: eggs, sugar, flour, and milk. Then, Ahmed put all the ingredients in a bowl and mixed them. After that, he put the mix in the oven for thirty minutes. While he was waiting for the time to end, he fell asleep. His brother came to the kitchen and took the cake out of the oven. It looked very delicious!

Hi Batoul! You did a wonderful job sharing the story about Ahmed baking a cake for his sister’s birthday! I really enjoyed how you included every step he took, from picking up the ingredients to mixing them all together. The part where he fell asleep while waiting was such a funny touch! To make your writing even better, just keep an eye on spelling and consider adding a little more detail about how the cake turned out. Great work!

2025年4月20日

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