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Some people send their parents to nursing homes, because they have no possibility to provide them proper healthcare. In same ocassions those eldery people need special equipment or exercise routine which is better with professional assistance. They also can have mental problem such as Alzheimer disease or similar and it is very hard for their children to make safe area in their houses or they cannnot allow to leave their jobs in order to take care of their parents.
However, some children are not willig to help their eldery parents with minor things such as shopping, help them with tidiing up, gardening or escort them to the doctors'. They even do not vistit their parents or call them regulary. Sometimes it is lack of care for parents caused by child abuse or by bad relationships in family.
Generally, it can be better for parents themselves to stay at nursing home in case of serious helath problems. Their children can visit them regulary and give psychological support to them. On the other hand, if somebody do not sent their parents to the nursing home does not necessary imply that he or she care for his/her parents and help them enough.
2021年9月20日 14:22
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Some people send their parents to nursing homes because they have no
possible way to provide them with proper healthcare. In similar occasions, those eldery
people need special equipment or exercise routines which are better with
professional assistance. They can also have mental problem such as Alzheimer’s
disease or similar, and it is difficult for their children to make a safe area in
their homes. They also cannot leave their jobs in order to take care of
their parents. However, some children are not willing to help their elderly
parents with minor things such as shopping, help them with tidying up, gardening
or escort them to the doctor. They don’t even visit their parents or call
them regulary. Sometimes it is lack of care for parents caused by child abuse or
by bad relationships in the family. Generally, it can be better for parents
themselves to stay at nursing home in case of serious helath problems. Their
children can visit them regulary and give them support. On the
other hand, if somebody does not send their parents to a nursing home, it does not
necessary imply that he or she cares for his/her parents and help them enough.
Hey Aneta
This is an interesting view! Note we wouldn’t use a comma with a conjunction like “because.” Also because you spoke about the plural “elderly people,” everything following should agree with that subject and so should also become plural forms as per my correction. Also I don’t know if “psychological” support is a thing though we can just use the broader term and everything will be applied to that! A few other changes here and there and your English is better ! Hope this helps :) If you’d like to learn more then feel free to message me and fill out my contact teacher form so we can work on a plan together !
2021年9月20日
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