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Soubhik Sen
My last trip was to Darjeeling. Beautiful town in west Bengal. It was a quite well trip. The weather of that town is amazing like cold around.I visited there during summer days and it was a rainy weather there at that time because of the monsoon. I will cherish this trip for life.
Correct me if I made any grammatical errors.
2021年3月9日 15:07
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My last trip was to Darjeeling, a beautiful town in West Bengal. It was quite a good trip. The weather of that town is amazing like cold around*. I visited it during summer days and it was rainy at that time because of the monsoon. I will cherish this trip for life.
Correct me if I made any grammatical errors.
*I don't understand what you're saying here. Maybe, 'the town is amazing when it is cold'?
Well done! I have been to Darjeeling before - the momos there were great!
2021年3月9日
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