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The lie chart clearly shows the statistic of the Chinese health quantity from 2012 to 2021.In general, it shows an upward trend. Notably, it increase softly form 2012 to 2016.In stark contrast, it sours form 14.18% to 25.4% in the following next 5 years. There are two fundamental factors involved in this tendency. The primary reason lies in economic growth. Owing to the steady and rapid economic development of our country, Chinese people's living standard is simultaneously improved at a fast rate. Therefore ,people can have enough money to better their physical health. Moreover, traditional ways of thinking has changed dramatically ,more and more people 's attention on health has been awaked. As a result, our residents tend to spend their time and money on health. In my opinion ,this tendency is overall positive and encouraging . Health is the basic of our life. with better physical and mental condition ,we will have a splendid life.
2025年12月8日 13:55
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The line chart shows the percentage of Chinese people who had a good knowledge about health over the period from 2012 to 2021. In general, it showed an upward trend. Notably, it increased gradually from 2012 to 2016. In stark contrast, it soared from 14.18% to 25.4% in the following 5 years. There are two fundamental factors involved in this tendency. The primary reason lay in economic growth. Owing to the steady and rapid economic development of our country, Chinese people's living standards improved at a fast rate. Therefore ,people had enough money to better their physical health. Moreover, traditional ways of thinking changed dramatically, more and more people’s attention to health was awoken. As a result, our residents tended to spend their time and money on health. In my opinion, this tendency is overall positive and encouraging. Health is the basis of our life. with a better physical and mental condition, we will have a splendid life.
The graph is all in the past so use past tense when describing it.
2025年12月8日 21:34
The line chart clearly shows the percentage of health expenses among Chinese citizens from 2012 to 2021. In general, it shows an upward trend. It increases slightly from 8.80% in 2012 to 11.58% in 2016 and soars from 14.18% to 25.4% in the following 5 years. There are two fundamental factors involved in this tendency. The primary reason lies in economic growth. Owing to the steady and rapid economic development of our country, Chinese people's standards of living have quickly improved. Therefore, people can better afford health expenses. Moreover, traditional ways of thinking have changed dramatically, more and more people tend to focus more on their health and lifestyle. As a result, our residents tend to spend more time and money on health. In my opinion, this tendency is overall positive and encouraging. Health is fundamental in our life, thus getting in better physical and mental condition will have a beneficial impact.
Maybe you should try to be a little bit more accurate when you initially describe the graph: are these expenses a percentage of the total budget of Chinese households for example?
2025年12月8日 17:27
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