El Bachir Diouf
The three most important thing in my life is my religion, my family and my study
2021年9月27日 23:57
修改 · 2
The three most important things in my life are my religion, my family, and my studies.
I highly recommend you always use an Oxford comma (the comma after “my family”) for ultimate clarity, especially when you move on to writing more complex sentences.
2021年9月28日
The three most important things in my life are my religion, my family and my studies.
I made a couple corrections! How long have you been studying English? If you’d like some help, send me a message and consider having a chat with me!
2021年9月28日
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