Yuma
Good afternoon, everyone!! Do you have a job you want to do in the future? Today I would like to talk about my ideal job. I have not yet decided on my future job. But I have three main requirements for a job. The first job requirement is that the job be fun. I think it is very important that the work is fun and challenging. If the job is related to your interests, even better! Work takes up a large portion of our lifetime, so if I don't enjoy it, I can't keep working. The second job requirement is that the job must be stable. In recent years, AI has developed, and it is said that there may be several jobs that will be lost to it. If AI takes my job, I will lose my job! That is a big deal. The third job requirement is a high income. I think that a high income is very motivating to work. Higher incomes will result in a higher quality of daily life. You will be able to buy the house you want to live in and the food you want to eat without hesitation. Isn't it very attractive? I think there are very few jobs that meet all these requirements. For example, jobs with higher incomes may be more popular or require more qualifications. Therefore, I will prepare for the future by studying hard for TOEIC and other certification exams from now on. And next year, I will start my work internship. I want to do my best. Thank you.
2022年12月18日 12:56
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Good afternoon, everyone!! Do you know what you would like from your job? Today I would like to talk about my three main requirements for a job. The first requirement is that the job be fun and challenging. If I find a job that is related to my interests, even better! Work takes up a large portion of our lifetime, so if I believe that if I don't enjoy it, I will find it difficult to keep working. The second job requirement is that the job must be stable. In recent years, for example, AI has developed to the point where it is eliminating other jobs. If AI takes my job, I will of course be unemployed and that is a big deal for me. The third job requirement is a high income. For me earning a high income is very motivating. A higher income results in a higher quality of life. I will be able to buy the house I want to live in and the food I want to eat without hesitation. Isn't that attractive? I think that the small number of jobs that meet all these requirements are probably very competitive. For example, jobs with higher incomes may be more popular and may require more qualifications. Therefore, I will prepare for the future by studying hard for TOEIC and other certification exams from now on. And next year, I will start my work internship. I want to do my best. Thank you.
I would say "motivating for work" rather that "to" work. Everything else in your version is grammatically correct, but it is a bit repetitive, although I gather this is a speech, so that can be OK. Still, I offer some alternatives for you. I hope that helps!
2022年12月18日
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