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Today was my son’s entrance high school ceremony. At that moment, he came into the ceremony room with another student, I didn’t know how to convey this feeling! It was an amazing time and touched.
He grows up. It doesn't mean I'm getting old.
When he no sooner was born than he got eyes surgery that made him almost died. I was cried many times but he survived. He overcame many obstacles until now. We always side by side , and that made me stronger person. Thank you being with me and congratulations
2023年4月6日 10:32
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Today was my son’s entrance to high school ceremony. I don’t know how to convey how I felt at the moment when he came into
the ceremony room with another student! It was an amazing time and I was so touched. He is growing up. It doesn't mean I'm
getting old. Just after he was born, he needed eye surgery and he almost died. I cried many times, but he survived. He has overcome many obstacles before now. We have always been side by side, and that has made me stronger person. Thank you for being with me and congratulations.
Congratulations to you & your son!🎉
2023年4月6日
Today was my son's high school entrance ceremony, and when he walked into the ceremony room with another student, I was overwhelmed with emotion. It was an amazing and touching moment for me.
Watching my son grow up doesn't make me feel old; rather, I am proud of the obstacles he has overcome since birth. He underwent eye surgery shortly after he was born, which nearly claimed his life. Although I cried many times during that ordeal, he managed to survive and has continued to thrive ever since. We have faced many challenges together, and that has made me a stronger person. Thank you for being with us on this journey, and congratulations to my son!
The original paragraph had many grammatical errors, incorrect punctuation, and poor sentence structure. I corrected the errors, added missing words, and rephrased some of the sentences for clarity.
2023年4月7日
Today was my son’s entrance to the high school ceremony. At that moment, he came into the ceremony room with another student, I didn’t know how to convey this feeling! It was a fantastic time and I was touched.
He is growing up. It doesn't mean I'm getting old.
No sooner was he born than he got eye surgery that made him almost die. I cried many times but he survived. He has overcome many obstacles until now. We were always side by side, and that made me stronger person. Thank you for being with me and congratulations
2023年4月6日
Today was my son’s high school entrance ceremony. The ceremony was held in a room with with other students. I don't know how to convey my feeling but I can just say that it was an amazing moment and that I was really touched.
He is growing up which doesn't mean I'm getting old.
He no sooner was born than he got eyes surgery that almost k*lled him. I cried many times but he survived. He overcame many obstacles in the past, we've always faced difficulties side by side, and that made me stronger person. Thank you for being a part of my life and congratulations.
That's a very touching message Sayuri.
2023年4月6日
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