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i went back to my mom's growing-up town to memory ancestors,after did all the stuff,we were wandering around this small town alongside the river.my dad sighed for pity,this whole place used to be prosperous due to the only transportation -shipping in the last century,but now,having been neglected for years,the whole row of houses collapsed,most of them had wooden structural frame with pillars,beams and earthen wall surrounding the houses on three sides.it was beautiful and it disappeared.what a shame. On the way back home,we encountered an old man who had lost his four limbs was trying pretty hard to move his body across a high threshold by his own.we stopped and waited to see if there needed any help.He looked us cheerfully,i guess it was because we were new faces who broke up the silence of village.he invited us to sit on his long bench and had a tea drink.he started to share his story to us. it was the late winter of 1994,He left hometown for the first time,aheading northeastern China to get a job,unfortunately,when the train arrived in Shenyang at night,he lost his way,carring a heavy baggage,no map,no phone,even no any building,He was scared and decided to walk along the railway until found a person.the temperature was minus twenty degree celsius then,and he spent entire night without any supplemental clothes and food,this led to deep frostbite gangrene of his limbs tissues death.Damage at this severe stage causing paralysis and lack of sensation.he was almost dying when people found him in the next morning,he barely speak any word to make sense. he said he felt blessed to survive at last,despite having disability.His wife left him after the accident,but he was very proud of his twins daughters,they have beautiful lives with perfect families,even they live far away from him. After he finished his story,i felt a little sad,i didn't know why,perhaps his story reminded me of the movie'CoCo'.
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El ChatGPT es una nueva tecnología que tiene la capabilidad de cambiar la manera en la que vivimos y trabajamos. Desarrollado por OpenAI, un grupo fundado por algunas de las personas más influenciales en el mundo, ya ha impactado nuestro mundo, en concreto las escuelas. La mayoridad de las noticias del ChatGPT lo han retratado mal pero, creo yo, ignoran la verdadera potenciál de la herramienta. Por ejemplo, muchas noticias dicen que se utiliza por los estudiantes para "cheat" en los examenes, escribir papeles, y hacerse pasar por personas reales. Mientras que eses usados son malos y necesitan ser abordados, todavía existe mucha potencial para la herramienta. Tiene la habilidad de presentar y explicar temas complejos, básicamente en el tiempo real. Los estudiantes lo pueden utilizar para buscar puntos de falta de claridad durante las lecciones, permitiendo más compresión sin interrumpir el corriente de la clase. Además, puede ayudar a los estudiantes que no tienen el mismo acceso a las herramientas de aprender más avanzadas. Al final, el ChatGPT podría ser un puente entre los estudiantes menos equipados y nuestro mundo cambiando rápidamente. Sin embargo, existen muchos peligros en cuanto a nuevas tecnologías. Como hemos visto en nuestra época, si no vamos cautelosamente, pueden tener efectos adversos. Las nuevas tecnologías deben ser estudiadas y implementadas con intención.
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To make bitter gourd juice, I first cut a gourd to slices, and then put them into a blender. The gourd is actually not in season, so it was a bit dry. Because I didn’t see much of the juice coming out after processing it, I just put a thick layer of mashed gourd on my daughter’s inflamed skin on the face and neck to abate her eczema. At first my daughter said it felt cool and soothing, then she felt itchy. I asked her to endure for a moment in order to let the gourd do its work. After a little while, the itching went off. We waited for about half an hour, and then I took it off from her face and neck. The red on the skin had greatly subsided, so my daughter was happy and hopeful. I then blended more bitter gourd and squeezed out a little amount of juice for later use.
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