Today I am going to talk about my work.
I work part time at consumer electronics retailer. I mainly sell smartphones, laptops and Televisions. It was really tough, but I learned so much and grew significantly since starting this job.
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Today I am going to talk about my work. I work part time at a consumer electronics
retailer. I mainly sell smartphones, laptops and televisions. It was really
tough, but I learned so much and grew significantly since starting this job.
You did well. You just needed the article before "consumer" and to not capitalise "television"
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