My hamster’s favorite food is yogurt. She likes it. I give it to her a few times a week. When I give it, I get the feeling that she is happy. Also she likes vegetables and fruits too. Especially she likes broccoli and apples so I often give her. I like seeing her eat because she is so cute!!
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My hamster’s favorite food is yogurt. (She likes it.) [We know she like it, it's her favorite] She has it a few times a week, which always makes her happy. She also likes vegetables and fruits [we usually say "fruits and vegetables"],too. [You said "also", you can omit "too" if you like, as a result] Especially she likes [She especially likes] broccoli and apples so I often
give her [these, too]. I like seeing her eat because she is so cute!! [I love watching her eat, she always looks so cute!]
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