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Hello all. I wrote the introduction for an essay. Let me know your feedback, I will really appreciate it. There are three abilities and skills that help me to achieve my goals of life. First, I’m extremely good at solving problems by using quality theory because any problem can be solved by finding the root cause. Second, I have excellent communication skills since I can explain complex concepts, ideas, and so on. Third, I can learn any subject quickly so that I’m constantly studying new topics in my field. Together, I think these skills will enable me in order to be a happy and successful person.
2021年1月18日 23:43
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Hello all. I wrote the introduction for an essay. Let me know your feedback, I would really appreciate it. There are three abilities and skills that help me to achieve my goals in life. First, I’m extremely good at solving problems by using quality theory, because any problem can be solved by finding the root cause. Second, I have excellent communication skills since I can explain complex concepts and ideas in an accessible way. Third, I can learn any subject quickly so I’m constantly studying new topics in my field. Together, I think these skills will enable me to be a happy and successful person.
Looks good :) I've changed just a few grammar things and added in content where I feel it would read better / be easier to understand. Hope it helps!
2021年1月19日
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