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There was a World Cup final at 4 a.m. this morning, but I forgot to watch it. I thought Argentina would win, but Spain won. A game between two strong teams must be very interesting, so I want to watch it when I get home.
Today, two of my friends had birthdays recently, so four of us gave them birthday presents during lunch. They were both very happy, and I was very happy too.
After school today, I am going to have a barbecue with four boys and four girls from my part-time job. We are going to rent a place at a beer garden above Yokohama Station and have a barbecue. After that, we are planning to play with fireworks together. I am really excited because I think I can make a wonderful summer memory with all my favorite people. I have not decided what to wear yet, so I will think about a cute outfit when I get home.
2026年7月20日 05:07
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There was a World Cup final at 4:00 a.m. this morning, but I forgot to watch it. I thought Argentina would win, but Spain won instead. A match between two strong teams must have been very exciting, so I want to watch it when I get home.
Today, two of my friends had birthdays recently, so the four of us gave them birthday presents during lunch. They were both very happy, and that made me happy too.
After school today, I’m going to have a barbecue with four boys and four girls from my part-time job. We’re going to rent a space at a beer garden near Yokohama Station and have a barbecue. After that, we’re planning to set off some fireworks together. I’m really excited because I think I’ll make some wonderful summer memories with all my favourite people. I haven’t decided what to wear yet, so I’ll think about a cute outfit when I get home.
Level: C1.
This is an excellent piece of writing. You organise your ideas very well, moving naturally from the football final to your friends’ birthdays and then to your evening plans. Your grammar is strong throughout, and the only improvements involved idiomatic expressions and more natural vocabulary choices. Excellent work, keep it up! 😊
2026年7月20日 09:46
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